A properly inserted semicolon helps to provide pause and clarifying separation in sentences. It also connects closely related thoughts. In this review, we’ll further consider how the semicolon operates in forming lists that involve items in a series.
Semicolons Use in Lists: Items with Internal Punctuation
Some of us at some point may have come across text similar to the following:
Marilyn continued developing a wardrobe that would complement her latest interests in style. It would feature retro silhouettes, different patterns with mixing of some, muted fall colors or blacks, whites, and reds, rich, vibrant textures, shoes with ankle straps, and definition of the waist.
We may be able to interpret what’s being written overall, but some of us may also feel as if we need to back up in some places to ensure full understanding.
Our job as writers is to convey a thought as clearly and easily as possible for our audience. The same paragraph could be made more reader friendly by separating the items into a scannable list. This is particularly true when we have internal punctuation among our items.
To do this in formal writing, we would first separate each item into lines of a list. Next, we would use a semicolon at the end of every line except for the last line to indicate the items are separated within continuing, punctuated text. We would then include the word and at the end of the second-to-last line and add a concluding period to the last line.
Because the text is continuing, we would not capitalize the first letter of each line.
Marilyn continued developing a wardrobe that would complement her latest interests in style. It would feature:
- retro silhouettes;
- different patterns with mixing of some;
- muted fall colors or blacks, whites, and reds;
- rich, vibrant textures;
- shoes with ankle straps; and
- definition of the waist.
Let’s consider another instance in which a list with semicolons can make content more readable.
Leticia loves to travel. Just a few of the places she has been are Madrid and Barcelona, Spain, Berlin, Frankfurt, and Munich, Germany, Rome, Naples, and Florence, Italy, Casablanca, Morocco, Nairobi, Kenya, Jerusalem and Tel Aviv, Israel, St. Petersburg, Russia, and Tokyo, Japan.
Right away we can see this text needs semicolons to better organize all of the commas in it. An initial treatment might look like this:
Leticia loves to travel. Just a few of the places she has been are Madrid and Barcelona, Spain; Berlin, Frankfurt, and Munich Germany; Rome, Naples, and Florence, Italy; Casablanca, Morocco; Nairobi, Kenya; Jerusalem and Tel Aviv, Israel; St. Petersburg, Russia; and Tokyo, Japan.
The semicolons divide the items in our series more clearly. For some readers, however, the paragraph might still be an eyeful. If we wish to separate the items for easier reading within formal writing, we would once again break out the items into separate lines, end all but the last line with a semicolon, add and at the end of the second-to-last line, and conclude the last line with a period. We also would not capitalize the first letter of each line.
Leticia loves to travel. Just a few of the places she has been are:
- Madrid and Barcelona, Spain;
- Berlin, Frankfurt, and Munich Germany;
- Rome, Naples, and Florence, Italy;
- Casablanca, Morocco;
- Nairobi, Kenya;
- Jerusalem and Tel Aviv, Israel;
- Petersburg, Russia; and
- Tokyo, Japan.
Semicolons Use in Lists: Long or Complex Content
In some cases we may also wish to create a list with semicolons if the text is long and increasingly complex for the reader to process. This is true even if the content does not have internal punctuation.
After examination, the association board determined that the resident had completed the right paperwork for building a shed, that the shed satisfied association requirements for external structures, that the complainant did not have proper grounds to request the shed’s removal, and that the complainant’s motions to the board should desist.
Now let’s break that up:
After a lengthy examination, the association board determined that the:
- resident had completed the right paperwork for building a shed;
- shed satisfied association requirements for external structures;
- complainant did not have proper grounds to request the shed’s removal; and
- complainant’s motions to the board should desist.
Note also that breaking the longer content into an itemized list with semicolons allows us to omit multiple references to the words that and the that had begun each dependent clause in the original text.
Related Topics
Semicolons
The Man Who Hated Semicolons
Connecting Sentences with Commas and Semicolons
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11 responses to “Semicolon Use in Lists”
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JimR says:
May 24, 2023, at 10:58 am
How is the last item in a series punctuated when semicolons separate the other items?
For example:
Sam went to Dallas, Texas; Phoenix, Arizona; Flint, Michigan; and Athol, Massachusetts to buy a pair of sneakers.
What punctuation mark should follow Massachusetts?-
GrammarBook.com says:
June 2, 2023, at 12:44 pm
A comma should follow “Massachusetts” in your example sentence.
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Lee McKenna says:
September 19, 2023, at 4:36 pm
Consider this grocery list:
Apples;
Bananas; or
CucumbersDoes this mean you have to get apples, and then choose getting either bananas or cucumbers? Or does it mean you have to get apples and you have the option of getting bananas and/or cucumbers? A is mandatory; what about B and C?
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GrammarBook.com says:
September 21, 2023, at 10:53 am
The list as presented suggests that all three items are equal choices.
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Regina Sharrow says:
October 5, 2023, at 9:46 am
I have a long list that looks like this:
If you invest, you should consider:
(a) [initial lowercase words];
(b) [initial lowercase words];
(i) [initial lowercase subset of words];
(ii) [initial lowercase subset of words];
(c) [initial lowercase words];
(d) [initial lowercase words].Should I use a period after the little (ii)? Or after each (a), (b), etc.? Or anywhere? I have used all semicolons until the end, then ended with a period.
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GrammarBook.com says:
October 9, 2023, at 8:08 pm
Our post Colons with Lists says, “With lists, you may use periods after numbers and letters instead of parentheses.” Therefore, we recommend using either periods or parentheses, not both. The rule of thumb is to be consistent.
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Saroya Crocker says:
October 23, 2023, at 9:25 pm
I wanted to express my sincere appreciation for your article on the proper use of semicolons. Your piece was instrumental in helping me understand one of the various applications of semicolons. Before exploring this site, I had never seen semicolons used to separate items in a series or list, especially when multiple commas were involved. As a student, I struggled to grasp this concept. However, your article explained it in a clear and understandable way. I want to thank you for providing such a thorough and insightful explanation of the proper usage of this punctuation mark. It has greatly enhanced my understanding of semicolons.
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Ronald Winegardner says:
February 3, 2024, at 7:49 am
Is this correct?
We also had the idioms: There is a time and place for everything; and Grit your teeth and bear it.-
GrammarBook.com says:
February 6, 2024, at 4:44 pm
Our post Colons with Lists says, “A colon usually does not precede a list unless it follows a complete sentence.” In addition, we see no reason to use a semicolon between the two idioms. Therefore, your sentence could be written as follows, depending on the preference:
We also had the idioms “There is a time and place for everything” and “Grit your teeth and bear it.” OR
We also had the idioms “there is a time and place for everything” and “grit your teeth and bear it.”
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sara says:
March 11, 2024, at 2:19 pm
When separating a list of questions using letters in parentheses, should there be semicolons in between?
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GrammarBook.com says:
March 12, 2024, at 3:06 pm
Since a question ends in a question mark, no other punctuation should be used following it.
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